Dakota,
Smart, funny, loyal,
lover of dogs and cats
` Who feels happy when she's with my family
Sad when , bad things happen
Scared when , people tell her scary stories
Who needs help , when she does math
Who gives compliments to people
Who fears , ghosts
Who dreams of , becoming famous
Resident of Helotes, Texas.
I love all types of dogs.
The shoe didn't fit at all.
When you really have it all.
Once was lost now,am found.
When you keep calling for help.
The delete button is really evil.
Dolphin,
loving, playful, trustworthy
Mother of, my calves
Lover of, the ocean, my family
Who feels happy when, swimming, eating
Sad when, my species die from other sea creatures
Scared when, my home gets polluted
Who needs help, adapting to other places in the ocean
Who gives, help to people when a shark attacks them
Who fears, killer whales, people trying to kill my kind
Who dreams, not getting eaten by other animals
Resident of, every ocean except for the arctic ocean
Dolphin
Comments (7)
June Shanahan said
at 4:48 pm on Sep 8, 2016
Dear Dakota,
I love that you chose the adjective "loyal." That's a wonderful quality. Can you figure out where the missing comma belongs?
Kelsey said
at 2:34 pm on Sep 15, 2016
SO, Cute!!
Hailey said
at 11:56 pm on Sep 25, 2016
The dog's are cute
Dakota said
at 8:58 am on Oct 21, 2016
Yes Mrs. Shanahan.
Mrs. Pruneda said
at 12:04 pm on Nov 2, 2016
Dakota - Great job on your page! I love those dogs wagging their noses. I have a dog and she wags her nose all the time.
Mallory said
at 9:24 am on Mar 30, 2017
Where is your photo?
Riley said
at 9:52 am on Mar 30, 2017
I love your dolphin poem!!!!!!!!!!!
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